Today I received notification that my
recent submission to the
Journal of Music Theory Pedagogy (JMTP) was rejected. The rejection letter is appended below.
The reasons for the rejection were many, but all boil down to this one, from Reviewer #2:
We have precious little time to teach students as it is now; if in their theory and/or aural skills classes they are dealing with a new notational system, I believe that will not support their progress in reading and performing traditional music.
One might paraphrase this as "Our patients are dying left and right, despite our
bleeding them with the best
leeches available. Your proposed '
germ theory' does nothing to improve the efficiency of our leeches, and hence has no place in the practice of modern medicine."
This submission/review/rejection process proved to me that academia,
per se, will reject JIMS
reflexively. This proof validates my decision to target my JIMS-based online courseware at "musically-inclined but not-formally-trained individual consumers" (using rock music rather than the Common Practice classics), thereby following a path very similar to that of
Rosetta Stone's breakthrough language-learning courseware.
Once the first version of JIMS courseware is on a self-sustaining trajectory, I can produce separate version that is
dumbed down (by using traditional note-names and staff notation), thereby meeting the needs of modern academia.
In the meantime,
illigitimi non carborundum, and back to developing the courseware!
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From: Steve Laitz [mailto:***]
Sent: Saturday, October 24, 2009 9:00 AM
To: Jim Plamondon; Andrew Milne; William Sethares
Subject: Re: JMTP & Paths to Musicianship
Dear Professors Plamondon, Milne, and Sethares,
I write to inform you that your article “Sightreading Music Theory” will not be accepted for publication by the Journal of Music Theory Pedagogy. Unfortunately, the reviewers found the paper to have little to do with its title: "Sight-Reading Music Theory." They were somewhat confused in that the paper appears to be a rewrite of
The ThumMusic System.
The reviewers felt that the article is not relevant to pedagogy in general and it does not demonstrate direct application to the teaching of theory. One issue each reviewer voiced was a frustration concerning constant references that were “beyond the scope of this paper” and that these references were often directed to your own website for explanation. They felt that anything that is not common knowledge in the theory community needs to be explained within the paper.
The reviewers felt that the non-theorist who is teaching theory at the collegiate level—and there are plenty of these folks who read JMTP--will not find the paper particularly helpful in pedagogical matters. Further, even the professional music theorist will reap little benefit from the paper given that issues are explored but not clearly explained. For example, the acronym JIMS is used throughout the paper, but there is never an explanation for what the letters represent, except in the abstract, and even there, the letter “J” is not defined. Other examples include the “pitch buttons” and references to “playing pitches,” but without clear definition at that point in the article. Regarding the Thummer instrument and the related ThumMusic system, both of which you mention late in the article, this all requires far more explanation and, more importantly, direct focus on the applicability of the JIMS System and Thummer instrument to theory teaching.
Below are detailed comments from each of the three readers that I hope will help you, should you decide to revise the paper and submit it to another journal.
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Reviewer #1:
Page 2, “scenario”: how can a HS band student have no background whatsoever and still play an instrument? How much does the author’s “etc.” include? Students would have to at least read music in a single clef in order to play, and presumably would know a piano keyboard. And that is one of my issues throughout this article—any pedagogy should help student musicians with the music they will encounter in any setting outside a theory classroom: in performance (printed scores); in analyzing scores in other classes, etc. Music is not going to be rewritten to accommodate a new technology.
Reviewer #2
1. Page 2, #3, Musical Isomorphisms, term “chromatic staff”: is he referring to a standard staff (capable of showing any pitch) or a specialized staff. I think this needs to be made clear.
2. Page 3: last sentence before section 3.2: re music-control interfaces: if he means piano layout, fretboard layout, etc, I think he should say that. I’m not sure most of us refer to the layout of notes on different instruments as music-control interfaces.
3. Page 4, the sentence that says the “extra” notes will become clear later – I’m not sure they do. Or at least, not without a lot of work on the reader’s part – see my note #21
4. Page 4, 2nd paragraph under Figure 3: “To play in C major . . . beyond the scope . . . ” – I think he needs to provide an explanation. If I understand correctly, this is somewhat equivalent to a transposing instrument – regardless of the key, the fingering always remains the same. Rather than changing horns, for example, one sets G as tonic, or A as tonic, etc.
5. Page 5, section 3.3: “Chromatic staff”: this 2nd reference suggests the chromatic staff is not our standard staff, yet I’m not sure how many people would know this reference. I am not familiar with it as far as I recall. So again, I think some explanation is in order.
6. Page 5, re Fig. 4: I think some examples would be in order to show what he is talking about.
7. Page 5, next paragraph, beginning “At the far left”: end of paragraph -- again, I think an example is in order.
8. Page 5, next paragraph, beginning: “All other symbols.” He cites his website for a detailed description of JIMS staff notation. Well, once again, if this article is supposed to explain “Sight-Reading Music Theory,” and the author is wishing to encourage support for this alternative system of notation, then I think fundamental information concerning these things is not at all beyond the scope of this paper, but belongs squarely in it.
9. Page 6: Are the terms “double harmonic major” and “double harmonic minor” common terms? They aren’t as far as I am aware, so again, should be explained, at least in terms of where these scales are found or employed.
10. Page 6: small point: Fig. 5: Make the outline of the white honeycomb cells darker – they are hard to see. But, if the scale dots should be white, how are they to be seen against the while honeycomb?
11. Page 6, Fig. 7 and 8 confuse me. I ultimately can see them the way the author intends, but it took some time and effort. Perhaps it would be better to use 2 diagrams to show first major, then minor triads. It took me some time to figure out what he was doing in this figure, which is duplicating each note (Do, do), to show how a single pitch fits into either a major or minor triad. If his system is supposed to make things simpler, this absolutely does not do that.
12. Page 7, Section 3.4.1: he says that we should minimize memorization load: Great! I’m all for using as few terms as possible, and not creating new ones, especially if they conflict with terms already in use for the same concept (one of my problems with Edwin Gordon’s writings). But he then introduces yet more terms to be memorized. Thought experiment or not, one cannot ignore the fact that students will be learning terms like Plagal and Authentic (and should!!) in music history classes, and or encountering them in various other classes and musical environments. In my view, music notation is not going to change. We have precious little time to teach students as it is now; if in their theory and/or aural skills classes they are dealing with a new notational system, I believe that will not support their progress in reading and performing traditional music. If a student has a gig, he or she needs to be completely conversant with standard music notation. Using the proposed set of terms would make it difficult for students trained that way to converse and play with other musicians, as I don’t think this will ever gain world-wide or even country-wide adoption.
13. Page 7: Similarly, bulleted items no. 3 and 4 strike me as confusing, and would add to what a student would have to memorize. (I admit that I am only vaguely aware of Nashville numbers, so I don’t know if this corresponds to them in some way, and I can see how this corresponds somewhat to how one would read a jazz chart. But it is still not really the same, so creates the necessity of learning yet another system on top of what students will need to learn in order to perform any standard notated music, or music from a lead sheet.)
14. Page 8, secondary dominants: maybe I’m slow, but I don’t get how his system makes this “entirely clear,” since in my experience, secondary dominants are never entirely clear to any but a very few students. So once again, I think he is asking too much of the reader to have to go to his website to understand how this would work (“beyond the scope of this paper”), since this explanation would seem to be at the core of what his title suggests. (Oh, wait – is he trying to drum up business on his website???)
15. Page 8, last paragraph, first sentence: “Likewise every occurrence . . .”— I’d like an example to see how exactly every Do-Fa-Sol-Do chord progression will look like every other.
16. Page 9, last bulleted item before section 4.2: I suppose this is correct, but how would it correspond to what students are seeing when they read actual music?
17. Page 9, section 4.2.1, Creative Power:
a. Again, one must go to his website to understand – very problematic
b. Syntonic temperament – again, one is forced to go to his website to try to learn what he is talking about. I used to know quite a bit about tuning and temperament, but I’m not sure from the article what he is talking about. Did he mean this was a Just system? That didn’t seem to be right. And how, btw, can a syntonic system be equal tempered? That is not my understanding of syntonic at all. Perhaps that is my own ignorance, but I’m guessing other readers would have a problem with this concept as well. So I did go to his cited publication to see what he meant. It cleared it up for me, but I think he needs to explain what he means in the article. I suspect that would not be clear to very many readers at all.
c. I think this could be pared down by saying something like “this system is capable of producing any number of tuning systems by simply setting the system via the controller.”
d. Next paragraph: very small point, but in the first line, the word “retaining” should be “retain.”
18. Page 10, fig. 10 – this seems to be getting beyond the scope of this paper, plus I’m not sure I completely understand his figure. I understand cents, I understand commas, I understand equal and non-equal tunings, but I don’t quite get what his figure is showing. And in fact, this whole section on tuning seems slightly out of place with what the first part of the article seems to be about. If the article is about pedagogical efficiency, and “sight-reading” theory (I don’t really think that is the appropriate title for this article, either), then this digression into tuning seems to me a bit out of place I believe this would require more explanation, but that would truly be beyond the scope of this paper.
19. Page 11, 2nd paragraph: “three full 8vas, of 19 buttons” – I think this needs more explanation: coming from a section on tuning, and tunings with many divisions of the 8va, this becomes confusing. I think he needs to specify that his 19 notes include enharmonic equivalents, including “De” and “My.” He says earlier on p. 4, below Table 1, that the need for these “extra” notes will become clear later in the paper, but he never again addresses that. This would appear to be the place to do so.
20. Page 11: Under Fig. 11, I have no idea what he means by 10 degrees of freedom.
21. Page 12, section 5, Metrics: umm, sorry, but I am once again confused. What does he mean that before Guido invented sight-singing his singers could sing but didn’t know any songs?? Of course they did. They learned them by rote and memorized them, just as any child learns the ABC song, Happy Birthday, etc, without ever learning to read music.
22. Page 12, section 5, second paragraph, 1st sentence: “ . . . quality of a music theorist” – I thought this was about teaching students, not music theorists?? Following sentence: “On the one hand”: this seems to be getting at a separate agenda.
23. Page 12, section 5: Small item towards end of 2nd paragraph: “To identify of key centers” – obviously, delete the work “of.”
24. Page 12, section 5, end of 2nd paragraph: “to recognize modulation . . . ” – he never demonstrated this earlier on, when he should have.
25. Page 12, Section 6, Previous Work, end of 1st paragraph, “most viewers absorbed the basics quickly.” As a reader, I would like to know what those basics included.
26. Page 13, top: Huh?? “this paper cannot and does not propose that JIMS be used today in music theory pedagogy.” I thought that this was what the article was supposed to be about?
Reviewer #3:
Page column line comment
1 2 15 On which page in Einstein’s article does this quote appear?
2 1 13 You should use a gender-neutral reference for the students. I would suggest you use “his/her” rather than “her.
4 Table 1 The fifth scale step in Tonic solfa is “Sol” and not “so.”
4 2 5 You write, “to play in C Major, one must indicate . . . that Do should sound the pitch C.” How is a student to determine what the tonic note is?
What are the criteria and where in this paper have you established this?
How does the student know if the piece is in major or minor?
5 2 1 You need a musical example to illustrate Ri as an “upward-pointing note-head” and Me as “a downward-pointing note-head.”
6 2 7 You need to have a page reference for Euler (is page 6 in Cohn’s article?).
7 2 5 I don’t agree with your assertion: “the ‘major scale’ and ‘minor scales’ are not scales at all.” A scale is a collection of notes that span the octave; the mode is the specific pattern of steps and half steps that encompass the octave. In his harmony book (Harmony, rev. ed. New York: W.W. Norton, 1948), Piston opines, “tonality is synonymous with key, modality with scale” (29).
7 2 20 Here I take exception to your premise that you are not “defining new terms for specialized uses.” Moreover, if a student is to be conversant and literate, s/he must know what “authentic” and “plagal” mean. Finally, for those of us who use do-based minor, reading la-re-fa-ti-mi-la does not allow me to audiate i-iv-VI-ii-V-I (aside from the infrequent progression of iv-VI!). Am I to assume mi means (in a minor) E-G#-B?
8 1 5 “3Do” reminds me of Percy Goetschius’s nomenclature in The Material Used in Musical Composition (New York: G. Schirmer, 1889). The difference resides in how it is written: in Goetschius IV2 = IV@. I doubt that the literate musician will know that “5So7” means V$.
8 2 14 How do I know that Re7 “is the dominant of the dominant” in a diatonic D-mode rather than the diatonic ii‡?
9 1 26 I do not believe that the ability “to transpose notation among clefs and keys; to identify key centers and key relationships; to recognize modulation to closely related keys; and so on” is irrelevant. A French horn player in band must know how to perform at sight an Eß part on his/her F horn.
13 1 1 This says it all: “Clearly, this paper cannot and does not propose that JIMS be used today in music theory pedagogy.” Moreover, nothing in this paper convinces me that JIMS will “improve the efficiency of theorist-training.”
References. By this I assume you mean a bibliography. However, some of the documentation is inaccurate or missing. For example, the ISBN for d’Arezzo is 1-896926-186 (not 978-1896926186). For Cohen, where was the book published?
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Steve Laitz
Editor, Journal of Music Theory Pedagogy
Labels: JiMS, JMTP, music theory