On Monday, I received an email notifying me that my
paper on JIMS Isomorphic Music System (JIMS) was rejected by the peer-reviewed journal
Music Theory Online.
The rejection letter read as follows:
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From: Matthew Shaftel
Sent: Monday, July 06, 2009 1:01 PM
To: Jim Plamondon
Subject: Re: MTO Submissions
Dear Jim,
I have just spoken informally with both reviewers and we are in agreement that your submission is not appropriate for MTO. It's underlying scenario is not appropriate to our audience (who mostly teach students with musical backgrounds), and the technology you describe seems far too cumbersome for entry-level theory at either the High-School or College level. In addition, we agreed that the articles advocacy of the Thummer (and subsequent open-source iterations thereof), is simply not appropriate for an academic journal like MTO.
I am sorry that we cannot give you any better news, but I wish you luck in your continued endeavors.
Sincerely,
Matthew
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Today I responded as follows:
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From: Jim Plamondon
Sent: Wednesday, July 08, 2009 12:24 PM
To: 'Matthew Shaftel'
Subject: RE: MTO Submissions
Matthew –
To be more specific, it appears to me that your rejection is based on three claims:
- JIMS is not compatible with traditional instruments and notation, and therefore not appropriate for students and teachers who have already mastered both. One could argue identically that Guido’s sight-reading technology was of no value to those who had already memorized the Church’s canon, as was the norm before his technology took root. Backward compatibility with established technologies is relevant only up to a point. Historically, if a new technology offers an efficiency-gain of 100% to 200% (i.e., twice or three times the previous efficiency), then compatibility with previous technologies becomes irrelevant.
- JIMS is cumbersome. “Cumbersome” is defined as “unwieldy because of heaviness and bulk,” or “troublesome or onerous.” I can’t see how any aspect of JIMS can be fairly described as cumbersome, compared to traditional instruments & notation. I suspect that what you really mean is that JIMS “is not what I already know,” which is just a re-statement of Claim #1 above.
- The paper’s advocacy [of the Thummer] is unacceptable. If an alternative technology is worthy of contending with the status quo, then it must provide sufficient benefits to overcome the inertia of the status quo. However, when an alternative technology is new, there has not yet been sufficient opportunity (by definition) to develop rigorous evidence to support its claimed benefits (else it would no longer be “new”). The factually-based description of *potential* advantages is, for a truly new technology, the most scientific discourse possible. Consider, for example, the metric system; before its adoption, there was considerable scientific discourse on its potential benefits – that is, “advocacy,” by your definition – which could not be rigorously proven until it had been adopted by at least one country. If JIMS is incompatible with traditional instruments, then it must be shown to be compatible with at least one novel instrument that delivers at least the expressive power of traditional instruments. This is not advocacy; it is counter-argument to the argument of incompatibility…which brings us back to Claim #1.
Hence, your only substantial criticism of the JIMS paper is that JIMS is incompatible with traditional instruments & notations. Yet this incompatibility will be shared by *any* paradigm-shifting improvement to the
status quo in music theory and/or music theory education. To use this criticism as the basis of rejecting the JMS paper is to enshrine, as an editorial goal, the MTO’s reactionary defense of the
status quo.
I sincerely doubt that this is your intent. You strike me as a good, reasonable, and serious person. I respect your good will, and hope that you respect mine, too. :-)
Consider your criticism of the JIMS paper’s “advocacy.” As you have noted, JIMS is incompatible with traditional notation and instruments. This incompatibility is likely to be noted by the paper’s readers, too, if only because I state it explicitly. A reader might then wonder if learning music using JIMS were a dead end, leaving no opportunity for expressive performance. Therefore, it is necessary, in any paper that introduces JIMS, to counter this inevitable argument with a counter-argument, to wit, that (a) Thummer-like instruments can be made; that (b) they can offer up to 10 degrees of freedom; that (c) this is more expressive potential than that offered by any other polyphonic instrument; and that (d) they offer the unique ability to control the novel effects of
dynamic tonality. If, as your rejection suggests, the cost of incompatibility is high, then the benefits offered by any proposed alternative must be high, too. To argue that the description of such potential benefits is unacceptable “advocacy” is to require only the negative consequences of incompatibility to be discussed. This is clearly a reactionary, pro-
status-quo bias.
Likewise, if the mere description of the potential advantages of an as-yet unimplemented technology is deemed to constitute unacceptable advocacy thereof, then no scientific cooperation in the implementation of such a technology is possible, because such cooperation requires exactly the shared awareness that’s blocked by this criterion. It’s a
Catch-22.
Consider, for example, Mendeleev’s initial paper describing his
Periodic Table, in which he described (a) a number of proposed corrections to previously-accepted atomic weights and (b) predictions that previously-unknown elements existed with the weights and properties described by “holes” in his Table. He had no scientific evidence whatsoever to support these claims; indeed, his claimed “corrections” to established atomic weights flew in the face of all previous evidence. Instead, his paper invited its readers to collaborate in conducting the experiments necessary to prove or disprove his radical claims. Those experiments subsequently bore out his claims, and enshrined the Periodic Table as one of the greatest discoveries of science.
Yet according to the standards of compatibility and advocacy you describe above, Mendeleev’s paper should not have been published, because it was incompatible with the
status quo and “advocated” – that is, described – an alternative to it. Had his paper not been published, then no one would have known of its predictions, and hence none of the research to prove or disprove those predictions would have taken place (for decades, at least).
Likewise, when Wegner proposed his theory of
continental drift – which has since become the basis of modern geology’s plate tectonics – his suggestions were derided as being incompatible with the prevailing theory of geosynclines, and his papers were often rejected on grounds similar to your claim of “advocacy,” because they described ways in which his theory resolved previously unresolved issues in geology, paleontology, and paleoclimatology – exactly as my JIMS paper described ways in which JIMS enables greater ease of learning, expressive potential, and freedom of tuning.
These are not isolated incidents. The history of science is rife with such examples; it is a well-recognized problem at the intersection of the peer-review system and paradigm-shifting ideas (see
here,
here, and
here).
Your rejection of the JIMS paper on the grounds of incompatibility and advocacy is, I submit, an example of exactly this kind of implicit, reactionary, pro-
status-quo bias. This is not because you’re a bad person, but rather because you are merely human, and have humanity’s inherent weaknesses…as do I. ;-)
I do not purport to have a solution to this systematic problem. I would, however, encourage you to look critically at the MTO’s use of “incompatibility and advocacy” as publication criteria; to consider these criteria’s roles in suppressing potentially paradigm-shifting innovation; and to reconsider the use of these criteria in the interest of truly advancing the state of the art.
Which is what such journals are all about, right?
Thanks! :-)
--- Jim
From: Jim Plamondon [mailto:jim@thumtronics.com]
Sent: Wednesday, July 08, 2009 9:18 AM
To: 'Matthew Shaftel'
Subject: RE: MTO Submissions
Bummer.
Semmelweis reflex in action.
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